Life Drawing - Session 20

Fantastic Voyage - Chromosome and Growth Point Test

Chromosome on left, Growth Point on right, no glow

Chromosome on left, Growth Point on right, with glow

I like the way the Chromosome turned out but I'm not too keen on the Growth Point since the glow washes out the texture somewhat. I'll be fiddling with the Growth Points texture to try and fix this.

Fantastic Voyage - Script

The Cell Cycle Script by Alex on Scribd

Fantastic Voyage - Colour Palettes

Life Drawing - Session 19

Fantastic Voyage - Colour Testing

G1 Phase

S Phase

G2 Phase

These were just to see how the colours looked next to each other so I could find out which looked the best. I quite like 9, 15, 24 and 27.

Any suggestions are welcome.

Fantastic Voyage - Pitch Feedback

- Needs to borrow more game language
- Change way text is done
        - Not floating at the back
        - Important words as pop-ups
- Narrator in Youtube Style?
- Inventory
       - Place to go to do other things
               - Prepare for next level?
- Power-Ups
- Gentle shift between level environments
       - Not a hard cut between the phases
       - No Level Screens
       - Narrator mentions the shift?
- Cutscene section feel more integrated or go
- Parallax Problem
- Spellings
- Colours need to be calmer
        - Too much happening at once